Snow
A freeverse thought-poem by Sam Oliver [Eris]
Feather soft and light
With crystal cold in bounds
Like gentlest winter’s heartfelt touch
In frost-stars as it touches my skin
Can you feel it as it falls?
Can you feel it in the halls
Of ice and warmth
Like love but numb
A heat inside
The thumb
of the world’s first
snow
Crystals falling down through air
That shimmers here
And shimmers there
Sweetest song played now for true
And all for you
Dear
All for you
Hear it bounce from flake
To flake
Leaving joy all in
Its wake
Like tiny golden suns in white
Flying down
They shine so bright
Can you hear it as it sings?
Can you see it on the wing?
Maybe not but still it’s true
As snow falls down and just for you
Now frost’s touch like feather’s sting
As of the cold in rapture bring
To me the light of winter’s first
snow, white
snow
To me the light
of the snow
Laugh, no, play!
It’s cold today
Bitterly dry as well
Truly a place with frozen lakes-
Finer never seen in hell
Which must have froze over
If here there is snow
It must have froze over indeed
I cannot think how now it sits
And grows
and shares its need
for me
Nothing now, but dust and dirt
Nothing for now and ever
I’ve worn not a thing, out here without shirt
Waiting as long as I remember
Still I am here, I
Lie here
stay here
Like a lost-
no
-a white little
lamb
In frost and fel
In snowless hell
I wait for its touch
To land
On a face upturned
Like a love unspurned
Waiting for flakes to fall down
Their crystalline forms
So blind to norms
That often pierce
The ground
I miss its touch
The heat is too much
Waiting here now
to die.
call me a fool
but with eyes like pools
I’ll stay here
And gladly drown
In snow.
In the pure, the white, the golden crystal snow
In the cold and the heart of it all
I sit here and sigh
And wait to die-
For the winter’s first frost
To show
For the winter’s last frost
To snow.
©2012 Sam Oliver [Eris]
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I miss it.
-Eris
PS: Sorry for the wait! I know, I know. I owe you guys all three days’ worth. This is just one. Poor form, Eris, poor form indeed. On the other hand, I think I have a new story.
Rather, a new serial idea. It’s been stewing in my head a while. I’ll see how this one pans out and keep you guys, gals and others all totes posted. ❤
Also, I’m fine. Honest. This probably seems a little dark. I’m not feeling dark. Really!
In other news? Jean shorts are pretty awesome. So’re shoes. They protect your feet. Not the shorts, I mean the shoes.
I miss the snow, too. I miss how you know just what to do with a snow day. Sit inside with a cup of hot cocoa and watch tv!
Wow, you made snow seem dark and romantic. Even I might start missing it now! And it’s cold where I am!
Whoa, romantic? 😛 That can’t be right! I don’t do that romance thing. Wait, yes I do.
It IS cold where you are~ I’m glad it had that effect though, the point of it was basically to evoke feelings of longing and such, so WOO. I went and succeeded at something. Of course, a first case definitely does not a formula make, but I’ll get it down eventually.